Going traveling is important to me
Going traveling is important to me. The most of important reason is that it can broaden my horizon. For instance, on the journey, I can meet many different people of races and countries, so I can learn the languages and cultures from them. Second, it also make me more independent. I have to handle all kind of difficulties, if I visit a country that I don't know about their language, and i have to think about how to express my feeling. And if I get lost, I have to ask stranger by myself. The last reason to go traveling is it can pufify my body and mind. When I am on the journy. I can see so many taking breath sceneries that can make me forget any pressures and let me feeling relax
posted by candy @ 5:37 AM
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1.title-->Going traveling is important to me-Draft One
2.The most of important reason-->The most important reason
3.Second, it also make me more independent.-->makes
4.all kind of-->all kinds of
5.and i have to think about-->I
6.ask stranger-->ask a stranger/some strangers
What is "pufify"? I cannot find the definition.
"When I am on the journy." should change to "When I go on the journey,"
" pufify " → "purify"
"let me feeling relax"
may change into
"let me feel relax"
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