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Wednesday, April 25, 2007

Autobiography-1-draft 2

On a nice afternoon in 1989, I was born in Tainan city. My name is Yi-Fang Lu. There are six members in my family. My grandpa is an easy-going person. We all like to take a walk and have a chat with him. Though my dad is a serious man, he always invites us to make tea. It’s a wonderful time to share feeling and talk about what happened today. He also teaches us some principles of life at that time, such as do not caring for everything, or you will not happy every day. In addition, do not touching drug and playing gamble, because they will destroy all your life. My mom is an optimistic woman, so she always looks on the bright side. Every time we meet some difficulties, she always backs us up and gives us a great courage. My sister is a determined girl. She always knows what she wants, and then she will make her dreams come true by her efforts. My brother is a cute boy, and he is a master of sports, like swimming, playing basketball, and riding bicycle. I am very proud that I can grow up in this family. It is like my own haven. I like to play table tennis, and running. I used to join a team of table tennis. Though we played not very well, we were more united after every competition. In my free time, I like to chat with people and make friends all over the world. I can learn different cultures and different languages by it. It makes my life more colorful.

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Blogger gimliong said...

On a nice afternoon in 1989, I was born in Tainan city. My name is Yi-fang Lu. There are six members in my family. My grandpa is an easy-going person, and we all like to take a walk and have a chat with him. Though my dad is a serious man, he always invites us to make tea. It’s a wonderful time to share our feelings and talk about what happened today. He also teaches us some principles of life at that time. For example, he asks us not to care for everything, or we will not be happy every day. In addition, he also reminds us not to touch drugs and not to gamble, because they will destroy all our life. My mom is an optimistic woman, so she always looks on the bright side. Every time we meet some difficulties, she always backs us up and gives us great courage. My sister is a determined girl. She always knows what she wants, and then she will make her dreams come true by her continuous efforts. My brother is a cute boy, and he is a master of sports, like swimming, playing basketball, and riding bicycle. I am very proud that I can grow up in this family. It is like my own haven.

I like to play table tennis and run. I used to join a team of table tennis. Though we didn't play very well, we were more united after each competition. In my free time, I like to chat with people and make friends all over the world so that I can learn different cultures and languages. It makes my life more colorful.

8:06 PM  
Blogger gimliong said...

It's good, but it also seems that the first paragraph is much more than the second one.

Do you mean the first one is much more important than the second one?

Maybe you can re-write a little bit. and that will be better.

Good job!

8:08 PM  

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