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Wednesday, February 28, 2007

Go to Temples.

Today we got up early and went to temples where in Tainan.
The weather is fine but also a little hot.
Everywhere full of people, it is very crowed.
And if you didn’t carefully, you may heart by joss stick.
We pray to god give us a happy new year and hope that everyone in my family has a good condition.

2 Comments:

Blogger Dora said...

"Everywhere full of people, it is very crowed."
"is" change to "was".

8:00 PM  
Blogger 美萱 said...

Some of the tenses in the article are not correct. You should use the past tense.

5:22 AM  

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