embarrassed experience － draft 1
It was the most embarrassed experience when I was a child.
One day,after cram school,I got in a red car , and I told my dad what happened today.
I told many things to him but he didn't respond to me for that. I felt very strange.
And I looked at him clearly. Oh ! No! It's not my dad and I got in the wrong car.
I said sorry to him and got out the car quickly.It was a funny and stupid experience.
posted by candy @ 6:47 AM
7 Comments:
"It was the most embarrassed experience when I was a child."
maybe you should chane "embarrassed" to "embarrassing".
Wow! It's really an embarrassing experience!
"I got in a red car"
"It's not my dad and I got in the wrong car."
Maybe you should change "got in" to "got on".
What an embarrassing experience it was!It's pretty bombastic.
It's really a embarrassing experience.
But luckily you found this thing before
the car srarted.
It was really embarrassing ! I think that you wouldn't forget it forever.
The man who is in the car must be very unaccountable. He would think you were crazy!
The man in the car would say "who are you?"He would see you are crazy.
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