Tips for staying healthy draft-1
People doing many ways to keep their healthy. There are many ways for you. Firt, eat more vegetables and fruits which are full of fiber and vitamins. It can help you to drain the bad things in your body. Second, don’t eat too spicy and salt. It is not good for our stomach. Third, keep the pleasant mood, if you are very sad or feel blue too often, it is not too good to you. You can share your feeling with your friends. The last one, taking exercise regularly to avoid being fat. The most important thing in our life is our health, so we have to keep our health by ourselves.
posted by candy @ 6:31 AM
6 Comments:
"People doing many ways to keep their healthy" the word "their" should chang into "them".
"Firt, eat more vegetables and fruits which are full of fiber and vitamins."
"First, eating more vegetables and fruits which are full of fiber and vitamins" is better.
Second,don't eat too spicy and "salt". may change "salty".
"People doing many ways to keep their healthy.""doing" should change into "do" or "try".
If someone follow these tips, he will be very healthy.
"Firt" you change to "first".
"It can help you to drain the bad things in your body." you should change to "It can help you drain the bad things in your body.".
" if you are very sad or feel blue too often"you can change to "If you are very sad or feel blue generally."
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