My Bedroom - draft 1
My room is comfortable but small. When you walk in the door, you can see the window in front of you, and there is an air conditioner next to it. The desk is under the window. The closet is in the left corner, next to the door. And to the left wall, you can see many posters on it. The bed is under the posters. There is a big bookcase on the right wall. My room is decorated simply.

8 Comments:
"And the left wall"
maybe you should chang into
"And to the left wall"
And you should plus "draft one" on your title.
You forget to put draft one.
You wrote very good.
被她們說完了
好像沒啥問題
可是好沒POWER=..=
結論句↑
There is nothing wrong in the article.
I think the man in the posters must be "王力宏"!
"When you walk in the door," should change into "When you walk into the room."
The room is simple.I like it.
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