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Monday, April 16, 2007

Autobiography-1-draft 1

On a nice afternoon in 1989, I was born in Tainan city. My name is Yi-Fang Lu. There are six members in my family. My grandpa is an easy-going person. We all like to take a walk and have a chat with him. Though my dad is a serious man, he always invites us to make tea. It’s a wonderful time to share feeling and talk about what happened today. He also teaches us some principles of life at that time. Such as do not caring for everything, or you will not happy every day. In addition, do not touching drug and playing gamble, because they will destroy all your life. My mom is an optimistic woman, so she always looks on the bright side. Every time we meet some difficulties, she always backs us up and gives us a great courage. My sister is a determined girl. She always knows what she wants, and then she will make her dreams come true by her efforts. My brother is a cute boy, and he is a master of sports, like swimming, playing basketball, riding bicycle. I am very proud that I can grow up in this family. It is like my own haven.
I like to play table tennis, and running. I used to join a team of table tennis. Though we played not very well, we were more united after every competition. In my free time, I like to chat with people and make friends all over the world. I can learn different cultures and different languages by it. It makes my life more colorful

7 Comments:

Blogger Fanny said...

you did a very good job.
your family are very exquisite.

4:12 AM  
Blogger 娜娜 said...

I think you have a wonderful family.
I'm glad for you.

3:48 AM  
Blogger 美萱 said...

You were born in a great family.

11:45 PM  
Blogger Phoebe Lee said...

You writed well.

I think that your family is harmonious.
It's very good for you!

4:59 AM  
Blogger Jenny said...

"He also teaches us some principles of life at that time. Such as do not caring for everything, or you will not happy every day." changes into "He also teaches us some principles of life at that time, such as does not caring for everything, or you will not happy every day." is better.

7:07 AM  
Blogger  said...

Great!You have a great family!

6:17 AM  
Blogger Dora said...

"My brother is a cute boy, and he is a master of sports, like swimming, playing basketball, riding bicycle."
Write "My....playing basketball ,and riding bicycle." is better.

7:59 PM  

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