the terrible experience I had draft 1

Last summer vacation, my family and I went to Taitong to visit our relatives. On our way home, we ate, drank and sang together in the car. However, we never known what would happen at this happy time. It was the car that couldn’t stop, and it was almost out of control. To aid our misery, there were all cliffs around us. If the car couldn’t stop, we had must fallen down. I cried, for my scaring and I just thought I must die. But the miracle appeared. There was a small hill on the side, so we decided to bump into it. Fortunately, the car stopped and we still alive. It was the most terrible trip I never had.